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校园里的花(现代诗)

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发表于 2021-3-24 16:43:01 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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校园里的花(现代诗)
文/石秀
2021/3/18周四


校园里,
各色玉兰次第盛开;
一旁的早樱也微露花心,
虽然羞涩,却也按捺不住。

怒放的玉兰,
像极了孩子们烂漫无邪的笑脸;
犹抱琵琶半遮面、白里透红的樱花,
酷似女生害羞的眼神和粉嫩的皮肤。

曾无数次感慨,
一辈子窝在校园里太憋屈,
诗和远方全都辜负。
如今却感觉何其幸运,
终生远离沼泽和迷雾。

小时候,
本是一棵小草,
园丁们朝修暮护,
才有了质变,
成了一棵小花树,
健康成长,有过绽放,
始终没有迷路。

长大后,
又回到校园,
一待就是三十年。
园里花草未被世俗肆意荼毒,
虽有斜枝歪杈,
修修剪剪,仍可努力向上;
虽有病虫害,
对症下药,多数药到病除。

花园里待久了,
手上身上心里时有花香。
虽然越来越老,
但是痴心如故,
庇护着园里小花小草,
竭尽全力留住一方净土。





Flowers on campus
By Shi Xiu
March 22, 2021


On campus,
All kinds of magnolias are blooming one after another.
The early cherry on the side also slightly shows heart .
Though she is bashful, she can't help it.


Magnolias in full bloom
Are quite similar to children's innocent smiling faces.
White red cherries are holding pipa but half covered by it,  
Which are exactly like girls' shy eyes and pink skin.

I have sighed with emotion many times
That it’s very suffocating being in campus all my life,
Letting down both Poetry and distance .
Now I feel so lucky
Because I can stay away from swamps and fog for life.

When I was a child, I was grass.
The gardeners worked day and night
To make me get a qualitative change.
I was changed into a small flower tree.
Having bloomed and grown up healthily,I’ve never got lost .

After growing up,
Back to the campus again,
I have stayed for 30 years.
Flowers and grass aren’t poisoned recklessly by common customs.
Although there are oblique and crooked branches,
They can still strive hard upward after being trimmed and cut.
Despite many illnesses and insect pests,
Most of the diseases will be cured if the medicine is right.

Having been in the garden for a long time,
My hands, body and heart are all full of fragrance of flowers.
Although I’m getting older and older,
My blind passion has never changed,
Which is to protect flowers and grass in the garden
And do my best to keep a pure land.
发表于 2021-3-24 16:45:17 | 显示全部楼层
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偶有所感,就写点,好坏估计顾及不了,能力有限,哈哈  详情 回复 发表于 2021-3-26 16:00
发表于 2021-3-24 16:45:34 | 显示全部楼层
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点评

要是我的诗词有不妥,尽管指出就行,只要别太难听,说我的诗如"酒鬼的呕吐物"或者其他类似的,一般我都能接受 那次有首词,有个版主说我“俗语”多,这个问题我知道,所以认同,只是暂时改不过来,水平还是太浅,  详情 回复 发表于 2021-3-26 16:04
 楼主| 发表于 2021-3-26 16:00:30 | 显示全部楼层
顾仲平 发表于 2021-3-24 16:45
育苗成林,撒种结果,教书育人,功德无量!

偶有所感,就写点,好坏估计顾及不了,能力有限,哈哈
 楼主| 发表于 2021-3-26 16:04:29 | 显示全部楼层
顾仲平 发表于 2021-3-24 16:45
赏读雅制,赞美老师,问好老友!

要是我的诗词有不妥,尽管指出就行,只要别太难听,说我的诗如"酒鬼的呕吐物"或者其他类似的,一般我都能接受

那次有首词,有个版主说我“俗语”多,这个问题我知道,所以认同,只是暂时改不过来,水平还是太浅,不知啥时候能真正会用诗语
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